翻譯一段文章，想知道有沒有翻錯 - 手錶

一小段文章，想配合字典跟軟體做翻譯，但不知道有沒有翻錯，有錯的地方還請各位大大幫忙找出來改一下0.0"
"This one would go well with your watch , " he said .
他說 " 這一個和你的錶非常相配 "
Surprised by what salesman said , Cerita dropped the ring suddenly and looked at the watch.
男店員說的話令她吃驚，Cerita放下戒指，並且看著手錶。
There it was , ticking away , louder than ever .
它在那裡發出的滴答聲比以前更大。
In another shop , someone asked her the time .
在另一家商店中，某人問他時間。
Cerita jumped . " I don't know , " she said .
Cerita嚇了一跳。她說我不知道。
Then she heard the ticking again . " Oh ! Oh , yes , it's let's see ..."
然後她再次聽到滴答聲。噢 ! 噢，是，我看看 ...。(這段最不確定)
Her voice shook as she told the time .
當她告訴時間時，她的聲音顫抖。
Why had she been asked in the first place ? Were people searching for the watch ?
她為什麼被先問？ 人們尋找這只錶嗎？(這段也是~囧rz)