我的英寫作,可能需要改.題目AprilsellApple - 手錶

要有約50個不同地a開頭的字詞,
可能有些地方要修改.
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April sell Apple.
April.
April is good month,
anybody or anyone
can easy find a job in this month,
example,in America,
you can work in American apple shop,
act of help boss sell apple to any appear airplane's
abroad man,sell apple to actor or actress,
even another location,like apartment,
sell apple at AM,at afternoon,or after any action,
even it's will appear animal
come to here eat,like ant,
you are not feel angry,
because you always ahead money,
almost win your same age friend,
you even can't sell a lot of apple,
just sell a little apple everyday,
your money can above they.
Three years ago,
I am not work of sell apple,
because my pa not agree,
about my pa,he is able kill me,
when he is a few angry,
so I am afraid,I afraid him,
and I don't hate him at that time,
because that time,
sell apple is need across carry to river,
or along river sell,
it's danger and boring,
but now,it's already change easier,
don't work about river,
just sell apple in airplane
or apartment again and again,
all is free,
although money not more like that time,
it's already nice.
Sell an apple we can get NT200,
not only more but also crazy in we's feel,
but is really..in my image.
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to 非天使 ( 大師 1 級 )
感謝你的回應,我先回答你中文的部份.
2.q「那時不恨父親，跟那時在河邊賣蘋果有何關係？」
a:「當初我寫得時候,我以為在河邊賣很危險..後來想想其實也還好.」
我原想表達:雖然賣蘋果很賺錢,但父親不讓我做,
({省略了:}這麼好賺的工作,父親不讓我做,原本應該是感覺很討厭,)
但我當時並不討厭他,因為要一下搬運過河{有危險性}
、還要在河邊賣{原以為也許比機場或公寓附近危險.
但現在想想其實應該只是要跑比較遠、不方便}.
({省略了:}父親也許是為了我的安全著想,所以當時才不讓我賣蘋果,
我這麼想著,也就不怪父親了).
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3.q「最後一句，我不很了解意思，謹將它改為我認為可能的文意。」
a:「原意:賣一顆蘋果,我們可得到(佣金)台幣兩百元,
這(也許)讓我們覺得難以置信,
但是,在我想像(出來的世界中),這可是事實.」.
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3.a-2:其實最後一句,是想表現出幽默感,
就是先跟讀者說:「這是真的!」
然後讀者大惑不解時,
再說:「在我的想像(世界)中,真的會有這種事」.
然後對方就會想說:「哇!講那麼多賣蘋果多好,
我們看得那麼嚴肅認真,
結果竟只是想像而已喔!我們被整了!.」.
以期達到幽默效果.
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2.q的a-2:「剛突然看到,文中有提到"在河邊賣蘋果..是危險的、無聊的"」.