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Linda avatarLinda · 2013-09-16

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請幫我改改下面英文錯誤的地方..請告訴我應該怎樣寫會比較順暢..滿分五分這樣寫大概可以拿幾分?請告訴我寫的文章中文法的錯誤!!那個..句子沒有連在一起就別見怪了(指我只是想方便各位大大批改而已(小聲拜託請告訴我作文裡的「文法錯誤」不要只有幫我改寫啊感恩請問：如果俺把題目的圖片跟大��
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David avatarDavid2013-09-16
Yesterdaywasmy15thbirthdayparty.Iinvitedmygoodfriends,Peter,MaryandJohn.First,wesangabirthdaysong.Then,Iwishedandblewthecandles.Afterthat,weateabigchocolatebirthdaycake.Mybestfriend,John,gavemeawatchasmy15thbirthdaypresent.HowhappyIwas!wishing是進行式,但你表達的是昨天的生日派對,因此應該是過去式加ed.sent是用寄的喔,用give比較能表達''送'',而因��
Connor avatarConnor2013-09-20
這里很不錯aaashops。com老婆很喜歡俟于剸
Tristan Cohan avatarTristan Cohan2013-09-18
Yesterdaywasmy15thbirthdayparty.Itwasmy15thbirthdayyesterday.Iinvitedmygoodfriends,Peter,MaryandJohn.Iinvitedallmygoodfriends,Peter,MaryandJohntomybirthdayparty.First,wesangabirthdaysong.Firstlywesangthebirthdaysongtogether.Then,Iwishingandblewthecandles.AndthenIblewthecandlesandmadeawish.Afterthat,weateabigchocolatebirthdaycake.Afterthat,wehadabigchocolatecake.Mybestfriend,John,sentmeawatchasmy15
Hedy avatarHedy2013-09-17
要買高仿的還是要去http://aaashops.com/品質不錯，老婆很喜歡。伌亴吀哑倌主
Zora avatarZora2013-09-20
修改如下：Yesterdaywasmy15thbirthday.(Yesterday不能等同party)IinvitedmygoodfriendsPeter,MaryandJohntomyparty.(加上tomyparty)First,wesangthebirthdaysong.(a=>the)Then,Imademywishesandblewthecandles.(wishing=>mademywishes)Followingthat,weateabigchocolatecake.(after=>following,去掉birthday)Mybestfriend,John,sentmeawatchasmy15thbirthdaypresent.HowhappyIwas!(happiness是名詞，��